Pinecones Ghost? story

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  1. Pinecone New Member

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    Few people asked after I typed it to Teach, Mind you this is all true regardless of what you choose to make of it. It will not be edited for spelling. As I generally don't talk about it unless its with my friend that it happend to but its about time I share the experience
    Pinecone: my buddy and i used to get left alone on the weekends after school for friday saterday until sunday night
    Pinecone: so after gaming all day we discided that going on walks would be good
    Pinecone: so we go on a walk and start getting a bad vibe from this house being built. kinda like being watched. and it didnt stop. when we left. so we kept moving but it never really got better
    Pinecone: so we end up making it back to his place no problem
    Pinecone: next weekend we go out same feeling accept were hearing noises now
    Pinecone: get back no problem
    Pinecone: finaly we talk it over and we buy some heavy duty flashlights
    Pinecone: and grab bats and go into the house. we had the car on brights pointing at it the hole time. turn the corner...all noise dies. and we make eyecontact with this thing? 2 big read eyes humanesque figure and we book it. hop in the car floor it home. lock the door
    Pinecone: he goes to use the restroom and im in the second livingroom and i hear this loud crunch on the roof and a walking noise. WTF.jpg he comes out i tell him we listen and keep hearing it
    Pinecone: lock all the doors and windos get our bats and stay up all night and finaly pass out at 5
    Pinecone: wake up the next morning and go on the balcony and look around and their are 5 broken tiles that are just kicking it there. looked at eachother and called his mom just to check they wernt there the day before. look a little more and find large footprints off to the side of the house that the tiles were on
    Pinecone: we choose that hay maybe this isnt the best path anymore
    Pinecone: so we drive to a different neighborhood and start our walk. halfway through i start hearing a noise. "hey man do you hear that" "you mean the thing that sounds like a chain being drug" "yea that" "we should move faster" mind you both of us were 1 year into mma and were sparing partners so we wernt defenceless plus i always had my knife on me
    Pinecone: so we get back to his car and look around
    Pinecone: once again the black figure is there in the road the light seems to be getting absorbed
    Pinecone: book it
    Pinecone: it runs through the wash *in az there like desert areas for water to run during monsoon season* fast enough for us to make it to the other side driving around
    Pinecone: get back start hearing his dogs going nuts in the garage and a rapping on the window
    Pinecone: nope it til 5am again
    Pinecone: next weekend we mix it up again. got bigger flashlights and walked the opisate direction through the wash when were on the side of it on the concrete laughing and we hear some draging coming from the wash *usualy gravel in this one it was man made* so we threw a rock t it *i know right* and booked it back to the bridge that ran over it and saw the same figure draging a sack with what looked like a human arm hainging out of it
    Pinecone: book it back to the house lock up rapping and gargling continues
    Pinecone: we go for a walk again the next weekend through the desert with knifes and flashlights and i start hearing this noise
    Pinecone: "hey man do you hear a....swingset?" "yea i do....this is going to bother me lets go see if were just hearing noises"
    Pinecone: so we meander around for about 10 mins and find an area with a swingset and a bunch of white porciln dolls....well this is creepy..."yea what the fuck we should leave..." so we start to walk and were hearing children giggling...we move faster and try to keep moving but the noise stays nomather how fast we run how far we get the laughing just getting louder
    Pinecone: on the way back after we get out we hear a woman scream and the cyotes go fucking nuts *they only do it after a kill or to warn the pack of somthing bad* so we look at eachtoher like hay man maybe we should check this out
    Pinecone: so we walk over to an area filled with a black water like substance. dont know if it was blood didnt stay long enough to find out we heard the giggling and the chain again
    Pinecone: FUCK
    Pinecone: FLASHLIGHTS ARE DIEING
    Pinecone: BUT THE BATS ARE BRAND FUCKING NEW WHAT THE FUCK!!! its now 3:33 am
    Pinecone: dude...check the time
    Pinecone: no way
    Pinecone: this isnt fucking happening
    Pinecone: we need to go now
    Pinecone: right the fuck now!
    Pinecone: we run as fast as we can noise right behind lock oursielfs in
    Pinecone: i start to prety
    Pinecone: pray*
    Pinecone: my friend whos incredably aithiest and has never said this to me again said
    Pinecone: "your lucky....i wish i had a god to pray to rightnow"
    Pinecone: the windos start to bang
    Pinecone: were seeing black balls flying around outside
    Pinecone: just like orbs just no light like theres matter but none there
    Pinecone: so we start to look into local urban legends
    Pinecone: and we find somthing about a creature matching the discription that used to be rumerd to kidnap and kill children
    Pinecone: with the oldest "on record" being 18 we were 16 at the time
    Pinecone: discriptions matched perfectly
    Pinecone: accept for the thing that happend next
    Pinecone: the last thing on the list we didnt see
    Pinecone: the children
    Pinecone: we choose to take a different path once again one with more light
    Pinecone: end up walking
    Pinecone: by a building office building i think
    Pinecone: and a daycare center
    Pinecone: and we here the crying
    Pinecone: oh the crying
    Pinecone: i cringe thinking about it still
    Pinecone: we look in the lit building nd there they are
    Pinecone: in full 1950-1980 attire
    Pinecone: sunken eyes
    Pinecone: knes againsnt their chests
    Pinecone: crying
    Pinecone: pleading us to leave
    Pinecone: and some other things i wont mention out of the want to not remember them
    Pinecone: as the specifics of what they said will stick with me forever
    Pinecone: and i wish they would leave
    Pinecone: i really do
    Pinecone: id give anything to forget that night
    Pinecone: we leave
    Pinecone: fast
    Pinecone: i then..
    Pinecone: get a phone call from my then fiancee savannah whom i had been with for 3 years
    Pinecone: its 3 am
    Pinecone: shes crying
    Pinecone: talking about a black figure in her room
    Pinecone: and the crying
    Pinecone: she mentions the crying
    Pinecone: she hangs up
    Pinecone: cant get incontact with her for the rest of the night
    Pinecone: my bud mike and i are freaking out
    Pinecone: we cant sleep
    Pinecone: we get back and the night continues
    Pinecone: i call my budy max and hes less than please to get the call and he happens to be wiccan
    Pinecone: dude this is whats going on
    Pinecone: his words were clear "dont leave the house"
    Pinecone: why"
    Pinecone: FUCKING DONT
    Pinecone: yes and no
    Pinecone: he hinted like he knew what it was
    Pinecone: and discribed what we were seeing and hearing
    Pinecone: but he refused to tell us
    Pinecone: i still ask him ocasionaly but he still wont
    Pinecone: said he will tell me eventualy when theres no worry about it
    Pinecone: so
    Pinecone: i call savannah at 8 am and she answers
    Pinecone: doesnt remember making the call
    Pinecone: i look at my phone
    Pinecone: no call in the log
    Pinecone: mike she didnt call
    Pinecone: what?
    Pinecone: she didnt fuckign call
    Pinecone: but we heard her on the phone!!
    Pinecone: i know..
    Pinecone: so the weekend ends and thwe week is rather normal after that
    Pinecone: next weekend comes up
    Pinecone: the house is finished
    Pinecone: but
    Pinecone: theres a new one
    Pinecone: being built nexto it
    Pinecone: a 2 storyy
    Pinecone: so were getting angry now
    Pinecone: were teenage boys with weapons who do mma weekly
    Pinecone: we think we can take on anything
    Pinecone: we go in
    Pinecone: i look at him
    Pinecone: wheres the sound of the cricket
    Pinecone: s
    Pinecone: huh?
    Pinecone: and the cyotes they were howling
    Pinecone: then the crying starrts
    Pinecone: its at the top of the stairs
    Pinecone: it knows were there
    Pinecone: we know its there
    Pinecone: the crying gets louder
    Pinecone: "WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU WANT????!?!?!?"
    Pinecone: crying continues
    Pinecone: were paralized
    Pinecone: we cant move
    Pinecone: i dont know what to do
    Pinecone: the crying is making me break down
    Pinecone: MIKE WE HAVE TO GO I CANT TAKE IT
    Pinecone: WE HAVE TO GO
    Pinecone: NOW
    Pinecone: FUCKING NOW
    Pinecone: i trip and fall out the front dor
    Pinecone: door*
    Pinecone: he pickes me up and we ran
    Pinecone: we finaly get to a spot we can stop buy a built house
    Pinecone: and then the whispering starts
    Pinecone: its audiobul
    Pinecone: but i cant understand what its saying
    Pinecone: mike mannages to pick out "something wicked this way comes"
    Pinecone: what
    Pinecone: it starts again
    Pinecone: fuck
    Pinecone: we get in ihs car and drive on the freeway for 2 hours
    Pinecone: phoenix is really large
    Pinecone: 1 hour is cave creek to tempe
    Pinecone: so we end up kinda stop going onthe walks
    Pinecone: the noises keep happening for a wile
    Pinecone: but nothing really prominant other than dammage to his wall
    Pinecone: etchings
    Pinecone: really
    Pinecone: so i end up moving to nevada and we keep in contact still
    Pinecone: i find out about a year ago 2 weeks after i moved a family moved into the house and there was a tripple murder with the body of their child missing
    Pinecone: the young parents are dead
    Pinecone: to this day i still dont know what happend
    Pinecone: but i still hear that damn crying when i go out at night
    Pinecone: that fucking grying
    Pinecone: god damn it
    Pinecone: dont poke your head where it doesnt belong...you may not like what you find out. and im sorry there are segmants of the story i prefer not to share
     
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    gost story

    lol i couldn't read all the story so i skipped to the bottom and read the last sentence.
     
  3. Pinecone New Member

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    At lest you got the point of it.
     
  4. Furchee Yiff Staff Member

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    The grammatical errors made me almost drop the story 5 sentences in.

    I read most of it though and -sort of- understood it. Seen and heard worse though. :p
     
  5. Pinecone New Member

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    It was pretty freaky when it happend. :wcc: companion cube! yesh!
     
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    :wcc: companion cube!
     
  7. Pinecone New Member

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    Love at first sight :lovewcc::lovewcc::lovewcc: